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Старый 15-12-2008, 18:22
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Итак, девушки, копирую сюда текст - если есть какие то ошибки или неуклюжести - пожалуйста напишите, исправлю.

вот он:
Polina – an Angel from Kashino

In a small town not far from Moscow in the Nursery House there lives a girl. Her name is Polina – Polia. She is a little beauty, just two and a half years old. And she can’t walk.

Polia was born with this and she was immediately left by her mother, just as many other “refused” children. She went under a number of very difficult operations which saved her life but didn’t give her the ability to walk. And here starts the new story of Polia – the story of an extraordinary strong and brave girl.

Polia has many friends. “Rebiatki” she calls them. She makes friends with the children of her group and she easily communicates with the adults who work close to her. Polia is very well developed for her age: she can eat herself, wash her hands, she loves books with pictures, especially musical books. She has one such book and Polina wouldn’t even go to bed without it. Of course, you can see how sad she is when she watches other children of her group walk in the yard and play with the nanny, run in the play room. Always cheerful Polina becomes serious – she can walk either on hands of adults or in her wheelchair brought to her as a gift from USA. But, you know, Polia struggles. At the age of two and a half she masterly manages her wheelchair. She invents her own methods of moving, tries to crawl by herself. When nanny takes her to dress, little girl holds her sweet legs and reassuringly asks in earnest “Is it hard for you?”.

Besides inability to move Polia has some other diagnoses, but not fatal and they could be corrected. Much was already done for this. Now volunteers help to provide her with medical aid. Polia is glad to see new people, she takes pleasure in talking to them, shows her room and is upset when the guests leave. She constantly learns something new, remembers new words quite well – she has excellent memory. She likes to watch white snow going down, and pays attention to the cat’s smile in the book – not an every grown-up would notice it.

This amazing little blue-eyed girl has some inner strength, stamina, which helps her to struggle for her life, it helps not to vanish after the operations, and it guides her now encouraging to live bravely into a new day. Such fortitude is always amazing in children. But it’s not the only why Polina is very special. She is beautiful like a little mermaid. If she is helped now she will undoubtedly become a beautiful girl – dark haired and with wonderful blue eyes of rare shape. It is evident now that she has beauty and self esteem. It’s difficult to say what her life would be like if the girl doesn’t find family. Certainly it would be very hard then. But it is clear by now that nothing would destroy her courage and fortitude. Nothing and never. If we really believe that beauty will save the world, we should save the beauty first. And here she is – living in the Nursery house in a small town near Moscow. This little girl Polina needs a family to have a Destiny that she deserves. And she will be a treasure to a family who takes her.
Старый 15-12-2008, 18:29
ответ для vsveta на сообщение "Чудесная Полиночка,2.5года"
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Александр,

страницу полностью перешлю вам ближе к ночи - около 12.

может быть Вы напишите мне свой тел или позвоните - хотелось бы обсудить дальнейшие действия. ИМХО нужно поместить информацию о девочке на подобных иностранных сайтах. Для этого хорошо бы их найти и сохранить где либо в качестве базы данных для подобных случаев.

Спасибо

P.S. у меня дочка такого же возраста, прочитала, что Поля будет в Москве. Можно передать для нее музыкальных и других книжек? Может что то еще, что она любит? Все новое конечно.
Старый 15-12-2008, 19:47
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дорогие мои, обратите все таки внимание, что город, в котором живет Поля - называется Кашин, а не Кашино, поэтому она Ангел из Кашина
Старый 15-12-2008, 22:22
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девушки спасибо, исправляю
Старый 16-12-2008, 05:13
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Dzeen послал мне сообщение с чуть другим текстом, как я понимаю он был конечный???

Я передала его англоговорящему человеку (американцу) и он подправил некоторые ошибки, и по-моему текст на английском звучит замечательно.

Вот конечная версия:

In a small town not far from Moscow in the Nursery House there lives a girl. Her name is Polina – Polia. She is a little beauty, just two and a half years old, and she can't walk.
Polia was born this way and she was immediately left by her mother, just as many other "refused" children. She went under a number of very difficult operations which saved her life but didn't give her the ability to walk. Here starts the new story of Polia – the story of an extraordinary strong and brave little girl.
Polia has many friends. "Rebiatki" she calls them. She makes friends with the children of her group and she easily communicates with the adults who work close to her. Polia is very well developed for her age: can eat by herself and wash her hands, loves picture books, especially musical ones. She has one such book and Polina wouldn't even go to bed without it.

When she watches other children of her group walk in the yard and play with the nanny or run in the play room, the normally always cheerful Polina becomes serious, she can walk either on hands of adults or in her wheelchair, brought to her as a gift from the USA. Polia struggles, at the age of two and a half, she masterly learned to manage her wheelchair. She invents her own methods of moving, tries to crawl by herself. When the nanny dresses her the little girl holds her sweet legs and reassuringly asks in earnest "Is it hard for you?".
Besides the inability to walk, Polia has some other medical conditions, but not fatal and they could be corrected. Much has already been done for this, volunteers help to provide her with medical aid.

Polia is glad to see new people, she enjoys talking to them, shows her room and is upset when the guests leave. She constantly learns something new, remembers new words quite well – she has an excellent memory. She likes to watch white snow going down, and pays attention to the cat’s smile in the book, not every grown-up would notice it.
This amazing little blue-eyed girl has some inner strength, stamina, which helps her to struggle for her life, it helped her not to lose hope after the operations, and it guides her now encouraging to live bravely into a new day. Such fortitude is always amazing in children. But it’s not the only reason Polina is very special.

She is beautiful like a little mermaid. If she is helped now she will undoubtedly become a beautiful girl, dark haired and with wonderful blue eyes of a rare shape. It is evident now that she has beauty and self esteem. It’s difficult to say what her life will be like if the girl doesn’t find a family. Certainly it will be very hard, but it is clear by now that nothing will destroy her courage and fortitude.

If we really believe that beauty will save the world, we should save the beauty first.Here she is living in the Nursery house in a small town near Moscow. This little girl Polina needs a family to have a Destiny that she deserves, and she will be a treasure to a family who adopts her.
Старый 16-12-2008, 11:14
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Даятвоя

спасибо, да, я посылала уже откорректированную версию и вижу некоторые изменения. Спасибо еще раз. внесу их, кое-что хорошо бы согласовать с автором - там где порядок фраз был несколько изменен (впрочем, изменения уместные)

спасибо еще раз
Старый 16-12-2008, 13:45     #77
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Цитата:
Сообщение от даятвоя Посмотреть сообщение
Dzeen послал мне сообщение с чуть другим текстом, как я понимаю он был конечный???

Я передала его англоговорящему человеку (американцу) и он подправил некоторые ошибки, и по-моему текст на английском звучит замечательно.

Вот конечная версия:

In a small town not far from Moscow in the Nursery House there lives a girl. Her name is Polina – Polia. She is a little beauty, just two and a half years old, and she can't walk.
Polia was born this way and she was immediately left by her mother, just as many other "refused" children. She went under a number of very difficult operations which saved her life but didn't give her the ability to walk. Here starts the new story of Polia – the story of an extraordinary strong and brave little girl.
Polia has many friends. "Rebiatki" she calls them. She makes friends with the children of her group and she easily communicates with the adults who work close to her. Polia is very well developed for her age: can eat by herself and wash her hands, loves picture books, especially musical ones. She has one such book and Polina wouldn't even go to bed without it.

When she watches other children of her group walk in the yard and play with the nanny or run in the play room, the normally always cheerful Polina becomes serious, she can walk either on hands of adults or in her wheelchair, brought to her as a gift from the USA. Polia struggles, at the age of two and a half, she masterly learned to manage her wheelchair. She invents her own methods of moving, tries to crawl by herself. When the nanny dresses her the little girl holds her sweet legs and reassuringly asks in earnest "Is it hard for you?".
Besides the inability to walk, Polia has some other medical conditions, but not fatal and they could be corrected. Much has already been done for this, volunteers help to provide her with medical aid.

Polia is glad to see new people, she enjoys talking to them, shows her room and is upset when the guests leave. She constantly learns something new, remembers new words quite well – she has an excellent memory. She likes to watch white snow going down, and pays attention to the cat’s smile in the book, not every grown-up would notice it.
This amazing little blue-eyed girl has some inner strength, stamina, which helps her to struggle for her life, it helped her not to lose hope after the operations, and it guides her now encouraging to live bravely into a new day. Such fortitude is always amazing in children. But it’s not the only reason Polina is very special.

She is beautiful like a little mermaid. If she is helped now she will undoubtedly become a beautiful girl, dark haired and with wonderful blue eyes of a rare shape. It is evident now that she has beauty and self esteem. It’s difficult to say what her life will be like if the girl doesn’t find a family. Certainly it will be very hard, but it is clear by now that nothing will destroy her courage and fortitude.

If we really believe that beauty will save the world, we should save the beauty first.Here she is living in the Nursery house in a small town near Moscow. This little girl Polina needs a family to have a Destiny that she deserves, and she will be a treasure to a family who adopts her.
Девчата, так это уже конечная версия?
Если что, то давайте я пока ее размещу, а там если что подкорректируем.
Спасибо за помощь!
Старый 16-12-2008, 17:56     #78
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Запущена английская версия страницы:
http://opekaspb.ru/blagot/polina_eng.php
Старый 16-12-2008, 20:03
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а появились ли желающие взять Поленьку себе?
Старый 16-12-2008, 23:37
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да, эта версия хорошая и усовершенствований ей не нужно




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